@slutmagazine I am not opposed to feedback. Some dialog could be modified, and more things could be fleshed out. If by cringe you mean the dialog was not well created, I am not going to try and change your mind on that. But if you cringe at the how my character talks, that was in part intentional, as Soyjack is cringey by design.

In fact I would polished it more, but I was trying to meet the deadline of having this done before Christmas, so I spent less time with refinement. But still, I am happy that I got the story in a form complete enough to be ready to show others. I may do some polishing of the overall story in the future. I will not pretend this is a great piece of writing, as if I was trying to make a living as fiction writer, I would either starve or have a lot of work to do.

@houseoftolstoy Yet seriously you hit the nail on the head. These caricatures we made fun of 10 years ago about liberals and soyboys? They are real today, and one of my childhood friends ended up becoming said caricature. Your story is so accurate it hurts.

@TiberiusBravo87 @slutmagazine I made this story for entertainment value mainly, I am not worried about how realistic the statements my character made. In fact, he is meant to be a stereotype of a soyboy simp who thinks that being a "feminist ally" will actually get women to like him.

No need to take this all too seriously.

www.trp.red/p/houseoftolstoy/2285

For anyone who wants to read the short story I wrote (just in time for Christmas) here it is. I am not much of a fiction writer, but I had a story idea I figured that if I wanted to see it written, I would have to do so. So here it is.

@deeplydisturbed Seems I did not miss much from this speech. Overall a good thing, as I would rather not have some grand revelation of the new concentration voluntary quarantine camps or something else absurd. More of the status quo is shit, but that is better than hitting the gas harder.

I did briefly listen to a summary by NPR (know thy enemy), and there was not much from them either. As much as they are shills in service of the Cathedral, their dutiful reporting of the "facts" (which is just uncritically stating what this admin and the other bureaucracies say as if it is gospel truth) means that when they had really no major revelations that there was not much there.

@houseoftolstoy @CatholicNutjobSimpleton just spams Catholic politics videos, says a few weak sentences about something or other and then fucks off. If you're looking for a intelligent dialog then look elsewhere.

@carnold03 Fair enough. My comments were not necessarily saying that YOU were making any statements, but my thoughts on the article itself. Had you defended the context of the article, that would be one thing. Clearly, you are not, so you need not worry about my comments on it.

@houseoftolstoy

There will never be a real election in this country until the Justice system addresses the fraud found in the 2016 election. There is nothing else.

@carnold03 That "Trump would beat Biden" article is just silly, as if the election was not stolen fortified so that they could install their puppet. I care little about polls if there is going to be fraud and rigging while nothing is done about it.

Yes, it was not the first time, but it was so overt and obvious that it should never have been allowed. We are just tax cattle on a free range farm, and the farmers were not going to let the process play out legitimately. At least when we "voted" wrong last time.

@houseoftolstoy It's been very slow but people are wising up to the lies in larger numbers every day. The internet was a double-edged sword, they managed to push censorship in the corners of it they own yet you cannot stomp out all dissent no matter how powerful you are.